A Daughters Last Words


  By Kelly Moyle

A Daughters Last Words

A Daughters' Last Words

Momma please help me I do not understand,

I can not feel your touch when you hold my hand.

I've always did the things you asked, I promise I was good,

I heard the doctors ask you if you understood.

I can see in your eyes that something's very wrong,

You looked at me and said that I must be strong.

I know in my heart that I 'm not going to last,

Please hold me mom,I feel I 'm fading fast.

The light that's shining so bright in my eyes,

Is this what happens when everyone dies.

I know it's my time for I've grown so cold,

I've always thought that I would grow old.

I'm sorry mom but it's time to say good-bye,

I'll always love you even when I die.

So wipe your tears and smile for me,

My souls' with God it's been set free.

Written By:

Kelly Moyle

I know this is suppose to be atleast 300 words but it's a poem. If you sit and read this just place yourself there amd imagine how you would feel. Close your eyes and place yourself there. See everything around you, feel everything around you. You can even smell the smells that are in the air. This will make you think about things. What if this was your child. What if this happen to you. You would feel helpless. You want to help but there is nothing that you can do or say to change things or make things better. You wish you could close your eyes and make it go away but you cant. I know how I felt when I lost my baby girl and a friend of mine lost her teenage daughter.My son lost a good friend of his around Thanksgiving. His jeep went off a bridge and killed him on impact. He was maybe 21-22 the most. We were all close to him, he was like my son. He even called me mom all the time. It broke my heart too when he died. Kelly

Tags & Keywords : Love, Loss, Death
Kelly Moyle




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#1 Posted by KellyMoyle - Apr 21, 2009, 9:17 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

Feel free to comment on this. Thank you Kelly

#2 Posted by Angela (guest) - Apr 21, 2009, 3:45 pm Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfull Unrated

It gave me goosebumps!! Good poem and I'm sorry for your losses!

SURY

#3 Posted by SURY - Apr 25, 2009, 3:10 am Rating: ratingfullratingfullratingfullratingfullratingempty Unrated

It is very touching


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